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Its a story one cannot read with a sane head It was okay until she ran away from orphanag...

Ban Yeo dan's a cutie December 17, 2023 9:41 am

Its a story one cannot read with a sane head

It was okay until she ran away from orphanage (no actually, if stealing papers was that easy that woman can send literally anyone there and get her job done...?)

Main character is weird as well, like I know she and her mother were victim, but it has nothing to do with her half siblings, do they? It's so weird everyone likes her instantly like they are brainwashed nothing makes sense, feels like a random child wrote this, that's all


And a romance novel with a flowery happy ending where ML cheated on his wife for MC??? And that villain (victim) ex wife dies and soon does the innocent baby of that person????? Never have I ever seen a story like that, the author could have just reread their own writing before publishing it


I skipped to few last chapters and MC looks like a fake white lotus (like just imagine her being a villain who wanna monopolise EVERY good thing)


No offence to people who like it though but I can't digest this.


(when there weren't many chapters , I kinda imagined that MC will be employed by that white hair lady to investigate/do stuff that adults can't do (as Mc is much mature than others her age) later ML will join her or gets adopted for whatever reasons, they become super close, best friends forever, goes to academy and shit (for like investigation or just pursuing further studies) , meets her halfsiblings but they can't recognise her (are either bad personality villains or best friends with Mc) , succeeds in life making everyone jealous and butterfly effect makes the 'original novel's' contents destroy itself. Mc gets super rich and lives with her husband happily ever after, adopting poor victimized orphans and opening organisations to help orphans

I can't say anything much as I didn't read the whole thing(I physically and mentally can't bring myself to finish it )

Responses
    BrutallyHon3st December 18, 2023 1:12 pm

    I completely agree with you. I like the plot but didn't like the writing. They skipped so many stuffs.

    This child mc also really boring as she gets older. She did not mature. Still need protection from people. She also gets dumber- imma drop

    666titania December 30, 2023 7:41 am

    The revenge part is only at the beginning but the MC seems becoming more similar to the Heroine who can capture powerful men by acting cute & weak. It's like everything she done has a plot armor that protects her.