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A very strong 4.

Genboxxy December 11, 2023 8:06 am

A lot of whiplash moments and the pacing is inconsistent- smooth and slow one moment then torrid and rushed. I like that it's a beta x omega pairing, you don't see that much, usually it's alpha x beta, or the misdiagnosed beta who turns out to be either alpha/omega in the later chapters. It's good enough, but just not something that speaks too me, quite fairytale-like, had a strong beginning though, I was certain to give it 5, then I finished and I thought 4 is more appropriate. The author did say 6 chapters is too short for them, so maybe if they got more, they would've fleshed out the story more too, and it could be better that way.

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    Irene May 19, 2024 10:04 am

    Yeah, I have the same complaint. It felt super rushed in the last two chapters. Adam's appearance left a lot of things to be desired. That arc should have been longer.