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This comic is so quirky

Purky October 16, 2023 3:55 pm

This shit isnt even fucked up or psychological it just sucks.
This is just bad writing on the author's part.
Istg the author is just writing literal nonsense rn.
"I am sure mr jo is suffering more" he says as he has a thigh forced in his ass.
I am so curious to HOW will the author end this??
Istg if dan gets an arc for "having brain damage all along" i wont be surprised.
That man is fucking DELUSIONAL, i hate how stupid he is written. I srsly cant believe that people dare to call him doctor, jesus christ.
And we all know how sociopathic jaek is so no need to mention him
This story gives me stds, i am sorry but i cant see anyone genuinely reading this because they enjoy it (unless ofcourse they are mentally unstable)
Ps. Its so fun reading people defend the SHIT out of this comic; its as if their life depend on it. They look goofy af frfr

Responses
    Loveme October 17, 2023 12:53 am

    I know right! Finally someone noticed it. Doctors are supposed to be really smart. It is like he does not have a single brain cells. Lol!

    Jean-Alexander October 17, 2023 5:46 am

    OMG thank you. Yes, that's exactly it. It really is a writing problem.
    Personally I have nothing against plot that feature toxic love stories/characters.

    But here with Jinx, there's a lot of toxic scenes and nothing to show that it's not normal, on the contrary the abuse and rape scenes (because it's clearly rape and not sex) are treated in a sexy way. And for me, this is clearly due to bad writing from the author.

    And let me be clear: it's not the fact that the characters are in a toxic relationship that's the problem, or even that this toxic relationship is romanticized, but the fact that the toxic romance in Jinx is horribly badly written.
    A good example of toxic romance in my opinion is "Painter of the night", in this mangwa the author managed to clearly establish the Top/seme main character was toxic, while sexualizing and romanticizing the rape/abuse scenes a lot. But it's actually ok to do that BECAUSE the reader knows they're reading a toxic love story, not a healthy one. Because there is clue/détails/characterization/dialogues that shows that.

    In my opinion, the author of Jinx should make it clearer that this is a toxic love story. Instead of passing it off as healthy romance between a cute doctor and a MMA fighter with a "bad attitude". No it's not just Bad attitude in a sexy way, it's litteraly rapey/toxic/abusive behavior☠.

    I love non-con stories, but only when they're clearly established as non-con.
    It's a shame because it ruins the pleasure of the story (still gonna read it for the drama tho). I read a comment that said there was a lack of internal thought on Jaekyung's side and I agree. We don't know enough about what he's thinking and so it's hard to understand his bastard behavior. He can be a bastard, yes, but we need to be shown why.

    Well sorry for the rent, but yeah, I like what you said. (English is not my first language, sorry for the mistakes lol)

    Purky October 20, 2023 4:21 pm
    OMG thank you. Yes, that's exactly it. It really is a writing problem. Personally I have nothing against plot that feature toxic love stories/characters. But here with Jinx, there's a lot of toxic scenes and no... Jean-Alexander

    EXATLYY.
    thats exactly what i was saying, the writing in this is just awfull and the author keeps making this a healthy relationship and is not establishing at as the toxic one.
    Thank you dude you couldnt have said it better