This story wasn't bad per say. I was invested. Idk if it's COMPLETED OR NAH. But if it really is the end. I wish it was a little longer, wish it touched all the issues on hand.
1) Like how ML lied to meet up the ex even tho he was just going there to break it off. 2) How FL's parents especially her mom's blatant bias towards her and her sister, how both the parents SLAPPED the FL without a care in the world. No wonder FL feels awful and compared herself to her own sister. I felt sad. How can we expect FL to have self esteem or confidence deep down when her own BLOOD treats her this way. I see and understand why she is the way she is. 3) ML's POV where it seems like he was intrigued or mostly just talking to FL to get over that so called burning in his heart to forget his so called crush. When FL ask what made him like her. He brushes it off by saying he'd regret it if he let her go?? Like whut?? Is that how he's suppose to reply. Σ( ￣□￣||)
As a reader from all this perspective. Idk...I don't like the parents but I DON'T REALLY LIKE THE ML MUCH as well. We don't really know anything about him as well. He's mediocre. If the story was a lil longer it could've developed both their characters. Sure, they're both not perfect. But when the story started from the FL's POV, she already had a sort of gut feeling that the ML wasn't that into her & at the end seeing the ML's POV. It's turns out to be true because he was just talking to FL(Hyun) to stop the burning in his heart because of his crush. Later, the ML starts to develop some feelings for her I guess or maybe gets interested. I feel like FL was SECOND to everything. If the story continues it's well and good. I need some development. That's my opinion. Take it with a grain of salt. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
This story wasn't bad per say. I was invested. Idk if it's COMPLETED OR NAH. But if it really is the end. I wish it was a little longer, wish it touched all the issues on hand.
1) Like how ML lied to meet up the ex even tho he was just going there to break it off.
2) How FL's parents especially her mom's blatant bias towards her and her sister, how both the parents SLAPPED the FL without a care in the world. No wonder FL feels awful and compared herself to her own sister. I felt sad. How can we expect FL to have self esteem or confidence deep down when her own BLOOD treats her this way. I see and understand why she is the way she is.
3) ML's POV where it seems like he was intrigued or mostly just talking to FL to get over that so called burning in his heart to forget his so called crush. When FL ask what made him like her. He brushes it off by saying he'd regret it if he let her go?? Like whut?? Is that how he's suppose to reply. Σ( ￣□￣||)
As a reader from all this perspective. Idk...I don't like the parents but I DON'T REALLY LIKE THE ML MUCH as well. We don't really know anything about him as well. He's mediocre. If the story was a lil longer it could've developed both their characters. Sure, they're both not perfect. But when the story started from the FL's POV, she already had a sort of gut feeling that the ML wasn't that into her & at the end seeing the ML's POV. It's turns out to be true because he was just talking to FL(Hyun) to stop the burning in his heart because of his crush. Later, the ML starts to develop some feelings for her I guess or maybe gets interested. I feel like FL was SECOND to everything. If the story continues it's well and good. I need some development. That's my opinion. Take it with a grain of salt. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍