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Zemshi August 14, 2023 9:38 am

i love the story however, it felt like we pretty much got most of the intro from the prologue. it feels stretched out and a lot of parts of it is unnecessary for the development of the story. most of the key infos are already laid out in the first few chapters, i just wish they already moved to the part where it ended on the prologue. obviously, there's only been 11 chapters so far but around 30 chapters makes a season. i'm not about to read more than 15 chapters of them being younger and stuff. just my thoughts, nothing's wrong with the story so don't attack me.

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