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Wow, I didn't know how to put it in words how I was feeling but you describe it perfectly.
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Wow, I didn't know how to put it in words how I was feeling but you describe it perfectly.
The story is good. I guess chapter 6 was a bit weird for me because him sleeping with another guy seems to be a conflict that should at least have 2-3 chapters dedicated to it. And not just “rushed mentioned” when they were out together for a trip.
Also I have no problems with him sleeping with when the uke told him off to do just that. It actually gives me the Ross-Rachel dilemma of ‘we were on a break’. My only problem with that is probably how the seme was portrayed because he seemed to be this loyal-dedicated lover type of guy; also he was supposed to be emotionally engaged with the uke. So him sleeping with different guys - he implied he did it multiple times - makes his feelings shallow and too disingenuous. That is probably why people have trouble with chapter 6.
It is definitely a good read tho, ch 1-5 was interesting. Ch 6 just, it should have just been an extra episode without that conflict suddenly mixed in.