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Ofc, it is written by a straight male and as a male I am proud of him. This is literally a pornhwa, ppl aren't here for the plot and the rating is also bad, you shouldn't get frustrated by this and move on
As someone assigned female at birth I think I have the right to speak on this. This story is litterally a porn. That’s it. No plot just porn. So ofc it’s gonna sexualize women. That’s the whole point. sex. Although I agree with 7 wtf was that fr and yeah the plot is shit but that’s bc no one is here for the plot
This is 100% written by a male and it's honestly demeaning and eye-opening,never have I read something so horrifically immersed in the male gaze
1.The hypersexualisation of the women-the way they are drawn (they all have the same body that derives from the male gaze-huge breasts ,small waist and big bum,hairless,the way they are dressed i.e even when they are wearing clothes the whole focus is literally on their body ),the thought processes of the women(like they're so shallow,speaking as a girl myself,who says girls are solely focused on appearance?)-they kept on saying having a big penis size is the only reason why they like him-WOMEN DON'T THINK THAT BLOODY WAYYYY?!?!WHY IS IT SO HARD TO FIND SOMETHING WRITTEN IN THE FEMALE GAZE!?!!
Also why does the author think women are so desperate for sex,that they'd be willing to have it in unhygienic public spaces
2.The men-all the men are problematic,the way the MC perceives the women as pawns and objectifies them-like Jisoo(I think-the girl whose ex-bf is a bastard) he was just using her as a sex object as a way of getting revenge,the way the other male characters are seen as competition to an extent-the other two men who aren't the MC are either drawn as overwhelmingly ugly or a bully,the mindset of the men-the writer makes the men insecure,horny and just misogynistic and entitled
3.The accidental but deliberate way his dick slips out of his pants? self-explanatory
4.The unprotected sex,the women are just ok with him putting his dick inside them despite knowing he's slept around and been a complete whore???unrealistic
5.The completely predictable plot-he's going to end up sleeping with all the women,I'm sorry but why do they write this like women don't have standards ,why do the men lack so much respect for the women ?????He's going to end up over powering the bully?they're both just as bad as each other
5.The fact that the MC is a prick but the writer wants us to feel sorry for him-because he's being bullied,because the girls are using him ????!?!?
6.Why is he rooming with 4 women???????
7.the sexual assault?!?!That was horrific
WTF,what was the author thinking?????