ml doesnt seem too upset that his wife just up and disappeared... and fl doesnt seem concerned with her baby either... theres no reason she had to run that far away either, i get its for plot, but make it make sense. the guy who she thought was tryna send her back to her world makes absolutely no sense, he very clearly said ''im gonna send u back to ur world'' so obviously she would be confused. once again i get its for plot but no explanation?? also no character development at all. character relationships are dull too. its a cute idea but just not executed very well.
ml doesnt seem too upset that his wife just up and disappeared... and fl doesnt seem concerned with her baby either... theres no reason she had to run that far away either, i get its for plot, but make it make sense. the guy who she thought was tryna send her back to her world makes absolutely no sense, he very clearly said ''im gonna send u back to ur world'' so obviously she would be confused. once again i get its for plot but no explanation?? also no character development at all. character relationships are dull too. its a cute idea but just not executed very well.