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I love Scarlet Beriko's works but this manga really has a shitty story plot that it still ...

Anonymous August 19, 2016 5:55 am

I love Scarlet Beriko's works but this manga really has a shitty story plot that it still makes me unsatisfied even though it has a happy ending. The plot is in a rush and it started off with Minori having sex with his customers but then came Souta, whom was introduced much later. Also, about their past and reason on why they separated is so dumb that it left me in a state of, 'Seriously?! That's all?!'. I'm not asking for much but if it's like that, then it so stupid. Especially Minori. It seems like she didn't planned well with this manga. In the end, it feels like she's covering up the mess she's made with detailed sex scenes and the couple being lovey dovey that will undoubtedly gain the hearts of yaoi readers.

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    lol August 19, 2016 12:54 pm

    Although to some extend I agree, you have to know that not everything is made for the plot (the majority in fact isn't)