I like the story but there's something off-- like the flow of the story, it just skips scene to scene and sometimes expects the readers to just understand what's happening. It needs more in between from dialogs and scenes
I agree it’s going way too fast
RIGHT? Like a lot of happening so quickly and it kind of glosses over things that should have a bit more explanation
I know what your saying
I like the story but there's something off-- like the flow of the story, it just skips scene to scene and sometimes expects the readers to just understand what's happening. It needs more in between from dialogs and scenes