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THAT VAMPIRE THOUGH

Emmy July 20, 2016 3:10 am

I want more of all of them. I would have loved to have seen the return of the married man for the first one. (i thought that's where it was going when he got the call about his dad. I thought it was Mr. Married saying he got a divorce from his wife so he could be with the uke or something to give it a bit more drama) I wish the second story had more because it feels like it escalated way too quickly. Just "wow I got turned on by something weird. Oh look me nephew brought home the guy that turned me on. Oh he's in love with me from stories that my nephew most likely told him okay, lets do the do in the kitchen" I felt it needed more drama. Then the third one. First of all THAT VAMPIRE THOUGH. Second it felt like it was just the middle of an entire diffrent story and this was just a little Easter egg that you occasionally find in different works by the same author. Was that what it was? Cause I would so read the rest of it!

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