The story had a lot of potential, it would have been interesting to hear and read more about this mysterious woman that the MC fancies. Possibly she is a criminal who targets rich foreign women in order to steal from them or maybe she is a government agent trying to discover the secrets of other countries. Maybe, in the end, the MC understands that even if she did not get the woman of her dreams, she got a new family. I do not know, but something more substantial rather than "she does not fancy me, oh, cruel god!". But I digress.
The story had a lot of potential, it would have been interesting to hear and read more about this mysterious woman that the MC fancies. Possibly she is a criminal who targets rich foreign women in order to steal from them or maybe she is a government agent trying to discover the secrets of other countries. Maybe, in the end, the MC understands that even if she did not get the woman of her dreams, she got a new family. I do not know, but something more substantial rather than "she does not fancy me, oh, cruel god!". But I digress.