Why don't you point out the the exact places where the grammar was off and how YOU WOULD FIX IT.
Wtf? Is that how you ask for help? Rude looser. Oh and didn't you claim the other group's grammar was off when you fucking can't spell 'director' correctly. How about it 'DIRETOR'
why don't you ask ya group's QC about it? isn't that what PR/QC do? or they're display? ╥﹏╥ cuz I've send some grammatically error too smh
I can point it out for you. Maybe in your server? I don’t mind. I can also point out the typesetting that needs fixing
Hi! Here’s the corrections you’ve asked for! I hope you read through them very well and understand why those are labeled errors. Maybe your proofreaders should do a bit more studying about English grammar and whatnot. You are very welcome.
•Prologue
“I will after I find a parcel for Director Yoon.”
Error: Punctuation
“I will, after I find a parcel for Director Yoon.”
“This is a parcel that our Diretor Yoon has been waiting on and…”
Error: Spelling
“This is a parcel that our Director Yoon has been waiting on and…”
“Looking at it close, it says that the opening date was 5 years ago… so why was that leaflet…”
Error: Word Form, tense
“Looking at it closely, it says that the opening date was 5 years ago, so why is that leaflet…”
•Chapter 1
I should give up a son in this harsh reality where it’s already hard enough to get by, maybe this is what she had thought.
Error: Punctuation, if you’re quoting someone, you should probably use quotation marks, even if it’s an assumption of someone’s thoughts.
“I should give up a son in this harsh reality where it’s already hard enough to get by,” maybe this is what she had thought.
“My job was to collect money and briang it back.”
Error: Spelling
“My job was to collect money and bring it back.”
“He was an idiot who’d be tricked into putting money in front of me whenever I’d act with alittle bit of squeezed out tears because he was that empty headed…”
Error: Spacing
“He was an idiot who’d be tricked into putting money in front of me whenever I’d act with a little bit of squeezed out tears because he was that empty headed…”
“Ah, I should start getting going. I’m purposely being tardy so that I could have my manager be fired.”
Error: Unnecessary/Wrong choice of words
“Ah, I should get going. I’m purposely being tardy so that I could have my manager fired.”
Hi! Here’s the corrections you’ve asked for! I hope you read through them very well and understand why those are labeled errors. Maybe your proofreaders should do a bit more studying about English grammar and whatnot. You are very welcome.
P.S. Yeah, I replied to the wrong comment but here, enjoy!
•Prologue
“I will after I find a parcel for Director Yoon.”
Error: Punctuation
“I will, after I find a parcel for Director Yoon.”
“This is a parcel that our Diretor Yoon has been waiting on and…”
Error: Spelling
“This is a parcel that our Director Yoon has been waiting on and…”
“Looking at it close, it says that the opening date was 5 years ago… so why was that leaflet…”
Error: Word Form, tense
“Looking at it closely, it says that the opening date was 5 years ago, so why is that leaflet…”
•Chapter 1
I should give up a son in this harsh reality where it’s already hard enough to get by, maybe this is what she had thought.
Error: Punctuation, if you’re quoting someone, you should probably use quotation marks, even if it’s an assumption of someone’s thoughts.
“I should give up a son in this harsh reality where it’s already hard enough to get by,” maybe this is what she had thought.
“My job was to collect money and briang it back.”
Error: Spelling
“My job was to collect money and bring it back.”
“He was an idiot who’d be tricked into putting money in front of me whenever I’d act with alittle bit of squeezed out tears because he was that empty headed…”
Error: Spacing
“He was an idiot who’d be tricked into putting money in front of me whenever I’d act with a little bit of squeezed out tears because he was that empty headed…”
“Ah, I should start getting going. I’m purposely being tardy so that I could have my manager be fired.”
Error: Unnecessary/Wrong choice of words
“Ah, I should get going. I’m purposely being tardy so that I could have my manager fired.”
Hi, and thank you so much for lending us your precious time to point out these mistakes! We'll make adjustments accordingly, thank you. However, out of these 7 that you've mentioned, only one of them is 'technically' a grammar mistake, and rest of the faults are minimal, small things that anybody, and any scan group can make. On this note, I still don't understand why you said such stuff? Not everyone, nor project is perfect, and that rule applies to us as well. I personally believe that having this amount of mistakes is better than having the first half of the summary mistranslated. What is your thought on this? :)
Ya’ll don’t just upload your own chapter one. Upload your own prologue too smh. And please proofread your chapters properly. I’ve seen some grammatical errors. This is downright rude. If you want to “claim” a project, do it from the top and do it properly. Make sure you have better quality compared to the other team. You’re just embarrassing yourselves like this. Also, try to study SFX translations, it’ll give your translations /flavor/. Thanks, peace.