I think she doing OK, you have to remember thatshe don't live in our modern era, and she's also a young lady. If she acted too much like she did when she was an old lady, her reputation would be completely destroyed and in that kind of world having your reputation destroyed practically mean screwing your life away. She's also only a Baron and that don't give her much power. Think of her situation as if you did something stupid and it was caught on camera and posted on every social platform, that could destroy your reputation and maybe even your life.
Agree agree agree
There is potential here but still incredibly cliche . How she goes from a young woman to being an old lady is disorienting . Pick a struggle girl. Either be a badass old lady or be a weak young woman . Don't randomly oscillate between the two