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I think u should let their characters develop a bit...
Like I rlly wanna know why she's so obsessed w ppl liking her...
Or where the blue haired guy got his powers from. Also what's his back story. There were hints of a psychotic mom. Or why does he feel entitled abt ppl's lives like that.
And yeah I wanna know why the red hair is beating up random ppl too.
A good story has room for character development... they don't have to likeable or perfect from the start. Of course it'd be an awful story if non of the characters issues get addressed and sorted out.
But I don't believe this is that type of story...
I really really dont like the characters.
The MC is obsessed with people liking her like an idiot and why the hell would you follow someone who wanted to kill you, into an alleyway KNOWING HE CAN MIND CONTROL PEOPLE TO KILL YOU. Shes so obsessed with being their friend, she doenst even care ab them, she just wants them to like her. And why is no one talking ab how when she got confessed to, which was horribl!e timing btw, she treated it as validation that "yup this is how it should be " and treated his confession as a case study success that everyone does like me. What an inconsiderate idiot. Like shes so annoying I dont mind if she dies but then that blue haired bastard would get his way and I DONT want that. But let's talk ab him for a sec.
We have been told that killing her doesn't guarantee their return, but this psycho really wants to kill her cuz he thinks shes annoying.....he isn't wrong but still. Honestly what really gets to me is how pretentious he is. Its gross. Fucking nasty.
Now the redhead, I actually really felt bad for her. Her backstory and all, it's really made me sad, until she started beating people who LITER half to death, idk why she decided to do this so I'm gonna read to find out. I like how she was able to see through the blue haired bastard though. People should put him in his place like that all the time.
And lastly the brown haired guy.......I mean other than the fact he chose the worst possible time to confess and was treated like a successful chem lab, hes really cool and my fav character and obviously deserves so much better lol, I mean that very disrespectfully.
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