The plot's good and unique but,, the relationships between characters is a bit,, ehhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Idk if it's just the missing chapters(??) but the pacing suddenly got fast as well
I don't know how to feel about the kid getting taken in by falcon or Mc constantly getting a new FL every few chapters or so, imo it'd be nice to see a found family dynamic with the doctor and mc but i guess that wasn't the case,,, im not sure about rachel too since it's so sudden,, and laura,, poor laura,,
The plot's good and unique but,, the relationships between characters is a bit,, ehhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Idk if it's just the missing chapters(??) but the pacing suddenly got fast as well
I don't know how to feel about the kid getting taken in by falcon or Mc constantly getting a new FL every few chapters or so,
imo it'd be nice to see a found family dynamic with the doctor and mc but i guess that wasn't the case,,, im not sure about rachel too since it's so sudden,, and laura,, poor laura,,