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You can tell this was made by a dude.

Khalifa May 9, 2021 5:11 am

I’m sorry but the way this story is set up is so obviously made by a man (not to say men can’t make good Yuri stories, it’s just we get... whatever tf this is a lot.) it’s honestly laughable how bad it is. The humongous tits that are bigger than her head with just one boob was something I was gonna look past but then you have the drunk rape attempt and then the masturbating on her clothes that she took without permission and then wanked on without permission. AND THEN SHE SEES IT HAPPEN!! Ur joking right,,,,, dropping this because that’s literally ridiculous. I would even be able to look past it if it was just porn but the way they’re trying to set up a tragic backstory for her... I have no words. Ranju is literally a creepy stalker and it doesn’t make it any less worse just cuz she’s a girl. I see this in yaoi stories too and both are just ridiculous. No matter what genre story you have, having rape between the two people who are supposed to end up together is just baffling. I understand if it’s a dark story or whatever but this is supposed to be a comedy romance!? Gtfo. Of course this is just my opinion so if u like this story that’s fine but nottttt my cup of tea.

Responses
    Jazzy May 9, 2021 5:39 am

    Babe you worded that so beautifully, come here I give you hamon kiss
    (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

    Kai May 9, 2021 7:26 am
    Babe you worded that so beautifully, come here I give you hamon kiss (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ Jazzy

    PLS not the jojo ref

    bananachoco May 9, 2021 8:47 am

    Isn't yaoi usually goes like that too lol, like I've encountered so much drunk rape tags before I feel bored of it now-

    Jazzy May 9, 2021 9:18 am
    PLS not the jojo ref Kai

    I had to

    Dro May 9, 2021 3:49 pm

    I accidentally disliked, anyway I agree with you (▰˘◡˘▰)

    Khalifa May 9, 2021 8:21 pm
    Isn't yaoi usually goes like that too lol, like I've encountered so much drunk rape tags before I feel bored of it now- bananachoco

    Yes it’s so common and it’s honestly dumb. I get that it’s fictional or whatever but cmon do better it’s so boring, overused and sometimes literally unnecessary cuz they already like each other! FIND A DIFFERENT WAY TO GET THEM TO DO IT! lol at this point I’m considering becoming an editor for manga just so I can make sure mfs don’t continue to overuse this dumb trope.