There were panels in the story that I thought jumped from one scene to another. I was kinda lost in the middle of it but eventually got the gist of the plot. The flow of the whole story seems to be rushed? At first it came like just a chill tempo, you know, but then, the scenes escalated a bit too ubruptly, it was so overwhelming. I think the author might have some story progression in thought, maybe? I wish there'll be something that will equalize the whole tone of the story. For the uke's part, i like his character. I like how he stands up for himself and knows how to refuse the seme. And for the seme, boy do you have so many quirks about you. First of all, i was thinking, "I thought he was smart? How'd he not get what the uke's trying to say? Like bruh?". I know smart people may be dull and apathetic at times and sometimes a bit too, let's say, have their own world to some extent, but not like the seme. He's a medical student he didn't even bother checking the history of the uke, if he really was curious what really happened. How can you just assume everything??
Anyway, you can tell im frustrated with the seme's character. but so far i like where the story is going.
There were panels in the story that I thought jumped from one scene to another. I was kinda lost in the middle of it but eventually got the gist of the plot.
The flow of the whole story seems to be rushed? At first it came like just a chill tempo, you know, but then, the scenes escalated a bit too ubruptly, it was so overwhelming. I think the author might have some story progression in thought, maybe? I wish there'll be something that will equalize the whole tone of the story.
For the uke's part, i like his character. I like how he stands up for himself and knows how to refuse the seme.
And for the seme, boy do you have so many quirks about you. First of all, i was thinking, "I thought he was smart? How'd he not get what the uke's trying to say? Like bruh?". I know smart people may be dull and apathetic at times and sometimes a bit too, let's say, have their own world to some extent, but not like the seme. He's a medical student he didn't even bother checking the history of the uke, if he really was curious what really happened. How can you just assume everything??
Anyway, you can tell im frustrated with the seme's character. but so far i like where the story is going.