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Jackalope April 22, 2021 3:57 pm

Plot: ??? Character development: ??? Motivation: uhhhhh
Not gonna lie, thought this had a lot of potential but it’s kind of boring. It’s like the person who wrote it had no idea how the plot will develop and it’s being written with zero planning. Also annoying how everyone instantly loves the protagonist when she’s impulsive and selfish. But it’s fine if u want a special girl story I guess

Responses
    Yodakatz April 22, 2021 4:06 pm

    I like the whole element thing and the suspense if SOMEONE finally finding out shes his daughter...

    Shindo_✌ April 22, 2021 4:39 pm
    I like the whole element thing and the suspense if SOMEONE finally finding out shes his daughter... Yodakatz

    I feel like they would freak out and bow ♂ or something