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Kisses_Kim April 18, 2021 12:22 pm

the art style is so immaculate. but in transparency and all, the plot is going places. its nice and its going really well but if you look at it they just kept adding more ppl without context just like chapter 12 where the black haired just slammed the silver haired one, and the part where the silver haired slapped the adam bootleg one. rather than focusing on the main plot (which is i think is the blonde and the loud dark blue haired one) they mixed the side couple and the main couple. the seme mc on the cover even only appeared for almost 4-5 chapters in the 12 chapters included here. i just think that it'll be better if they made another season or book with the side couple so that they wont overshadow the main couple. but don't get me wrong here, i def like this but there's some points missing and so.

++my theory is that the seme on the cover is the uke mc's step brother or someone in the past and they got caught doing smth together bc of a flashback panel and now which leads to the present.

its really nice and i'll keep reading it, i just hope that the future chapters will improve and all. thank you for uploading this!! ( ̄∇ ̄")

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