meh/bad (reviews)

somekne said Art is rlly pretty and there was potential but the story was very rushed and yet still boring, the romance progression was weird and everything felt melodramatic because the story and characters weren't built up properly

apparently confusing, rushed, doesnt make sand AND bad translations

someone said: shitty writing, arguments every chapter, arguments not even being resolved they just have sex, more sex. worst thing was The Arguments. almost every chapter. about the same thing. black haired guy. he says. You Werent Gay To Begin With. You Dont Love Me The Same. yooure gonna get a gf and leave me. apparenly he also has unfair demands like seme cant watch porn, ect

apparently too fast and super mid, like all of the authors other works

someone said: I feel like I didn't really understand how they feel for each other but their personalities are fun
another person said: cringe & mid romance

yeah theres blackmail and idk seme seems like an asshole and mc seems like a pushover

everyone is saying that upon rereading its actually pretty bad. it seems like a lot of people feel that the seme was actually kinda trash and lost of people were saying tjat this hurt to read/was painful

someone said that:I don’t know why but for some reason I’m not 100% satisfied with this, I think it’s probably because the angst was overpowering the rest of the story and if I have to suffer, I’d rather have fun with it
and apparently all the characters are morally questionable

ss: I was expecting so much out of this one, I’m so disappointed. The plot makes no sense, everything is so forced, like the author was literally just making the characters do anything necessary to keep the story going without ever questioning why. There’s no amount of cute art that can save this.

ss: unenjoyable. this bored me to death esp after the rape. There was no need for a rape scene. Like seriously what kind of development did the rape provide to the story? also, I don't understand why this shit gotta be so dramatic? Like ok suddenly the alpha has a heart disease or whatever Like wow ok that came out of NOWHERE. Pregnancy was also fucking unnecessary but I guess it was needed for the drama. Whatever. It's not horrible but it's not good either.