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The plot moves so quickly and the logic is so clumsy. Literally, alpha saw him texting his loser bf -> alpha saw his mark -> alpha offers him to be bitten by another dominant alpha to cure his heat cycle issues. Like, slow down!
that was so bad, the plot was all over the place, I hated everyone, truly the wattpad experience <3
2023-12-27 11:43
Tags: #omegaverse
Dropped
2023-11-12 23:33
Tags: #omegaverse #BL #Rich #Office #Betrayal
In terms of assholes, we only have douchebags.
End
Loose a braincells lol. I know this would be like this tho. What do I expect? The plot are full of cliche garbage. Like, i dont even know where to began. Sigh
Chap 83
Skim-read. Let me be honest. Art appears to be that of a 5 year old, storyline is as crappy as they come, and those together just don’t add up to anything. Did I mention the art is bad?
-09/03/2023
2023-09-05 05:03
Tags: #omegaverse
Completed but not marked as such
This was just painful to get through but I still wanted to know how it ends... Wish I dropped earlier
VERY STRAIGHT TO THE POINT ENDING, I LIKE IT!! THE WHOLE ELABORATE PLAN AS WELL *CHEF KISS* The start was rocky but dayum it ended so well 50/100 POG
ending fell flat tbh like so many open questions not answered n just the whole mc x ml relationship not fully reestablished and the fact they fell in love so quickly was… weird like the ml was known for hating ppl like mc and immediately fell for him in heat??? felt too fanfictiony… n also w the bonding ( i know its not necessarily needed but like idk all the drama in the beginning about marking for the mc to not be marked in the end??????) also i feel like pretty much none of the charas were fully shown justice . it was like the author had a idea to get from point a to b but had to scramble with little to know detail on the personalities and just the ppl themselves and barely idk explained things along the way made it impossible to feel sad for mc or ml that much except at certain parts a bit. like it felt :( it couldve been amazing if the author actually took their time and fleshed all the characters out properly … shoot i wouldve liked to learn more about blondie outta everyone oh and i guess kinda a final note the revenge was ass it was too easy and barely any real angst like it was so “love conquers all” inna way but also not because the ending was so shit
omega and alpha story. omega is a arranged relationship made by parents with a beta, so that he can produce a alpha superior. beta hate omegas and alphas and created a poison to separate any bond they may form. omega bonds with alpha boss and breaks up with crappy betta.
SO BAD IT'S FUCKING FUNNY.
1) The omega downs suppressants like he's a kid eating candy after trick or treating. On his knees, palm full of pills munching like his life depends on it.
2) At one point, the omega knocks over a fish tank. In the most dramatic fashion, he falls to the ground and somehow gets doused by water with his shirt and tie ripping open. Conveniently, his mark is revealed. Alpha immediately forgets he hates omegas, running to the rescue with a conveniently closeby towel. The omega offers to pay for the damage. No mention of the poor fish.
It's so dramatic with no attention to detail. I'll try reading again when I have some liquor in me.
2022-12-31 09:59
Tags: #Drama #Interesting #Alpha x Omega
Dont remember all their names but the omega mc really unnecessarily suffers alot in this story. From abusive parents to abusive first Alpha bf who really should be in jail for life for all the crap he puts mc Omega through. Add a disgusting crime boss father of Alpha mc who is the true main boss pulling all the strings. You have a overly dramatic plotline that seems all too real with how rich powerful people get away with so many crimes.
bruh the hell is this sorry piece of braindead story
16
I wish they had another baby
2022-09-15 02:18
Tags: #❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ #WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS......
Interesting story! Waiting for more chapters.