People who read Chronicles Of The Martial God

mich3311

Ch 85

Lunaison

I really enjoy this

bertie

funsies and overpowered

Black

Boring comedy

Zihvuda

The strongest martial artist in the world, gets sealed away by some immortals for... reasons. I think he may have done a bad? It's very vaguely explained. The guy stays sealed for 1000 years and then our story actually starts when he's already out and comes across a little girl about to starve to death. He eventually decides to raise her as his own and goes about trying to build a life where that is possible.
It starts pretty good and interesting. You don't really know where it's all going but the dynamic with the daughter is cute. However it's a bit odd. Supporting characters get introduced, but they aren't really properly fleshed out and some (like the poor magistrate) kind of get shunted right out of the plot, despite still kind of being there. It's really odd. It also feels like the story is fighting against it's own set up? Like the kid starts school, someone raises concerns about schools having bullies or whatever, and then it's just promptly abandoned. We also have the "training subordinates to get stronger" and that too is abruptly abandoned. At one point I seriously thought I missed a chapter or some pages were missing. I went to other sites to check. The plot segues from what I thought was going to be character development for a member of the supporting cast to something connected to MC's past and it gives you whiplash. There are attempts at world building, but why would I want to know that at the expense of getting character development??
A shadowy organization is introduced later on in the story. They are vaguely threatening, but not really because they aren't a threat to MC, merely to people he knows but aren't under his protection. Because of this it's hard to get invested or care about what is clearly meant to be looming threat.
I can see what the author's trying to do with the found family and not losing sight of what you already have themes, but it's not executed all that well. The people that end up joining MC's family are interesting when first introduced and you wonder what will happen next and are excited for how they'll grow, and then they're just there. Stagnant with no development in their relationships to one another. Everyone immediately loves the daughter, this is fine for the most part but she gets no chance to be an actual person. She's a therapy dog at best. There's been opportunities to do something with her, like that thing about making friends at school. Unfortunately it was just skipped over, even though there was set up! The classroom was depicted as kind of cold, and not wanting to accept her. Presumably the author didn't want to focus on that, but then, why bother with the set up? Why bother sending the kid to school? What's the motivation here? Was it there just to be a PSA on how education is important? It has no affect on the plot or on the little girl herself. She seems happy to go and excitedly tells MC about the stuff she learned on her first day, but it's never brought up again. And then later on we see she has friends. Apparently it was all fine despite the difficulties it was implied the girl would have to overcome. ?????? Thanks for not having any stupid one note bullies??? I guess???
Another character catches MC's eye as he sees himself in this other person. He sees a deep hatred in this other person's eyes, so he tells him to get rid of that hatred as it'll fuck with his growth as a martial artist of something, and the other character just goes "ok". What is this hatred? What's it directed at? How does it relate to his drive to become the best? I don't know. It's not brought up again. He presumably stops hating I guess, because he's honestly just a mellow dude who doesn't talk much. ¯_(ツ)_/¯
The story and characterization isn't executed that well, so I ended up dropping the story.

Jelaby

Chapter 85
Action combined with wholesomeness? Count me in

AkiraRaizel

This is seriously super duper adorable and awesome. Hilarious too!! Alot of hilarious cute part!!

Yumi-chan

83

Kakashi

No!!! I need more chapters!!!!!

Currently at Chapter 76

じぇれみ

This is really good
75
88

sophaayy

88

Neko Cofi

AAAAAHHHHH ANG GANDA LAST
READ CH.85 end of season 2.
Balik dito pag nasa ch.110

Kelly

74
Sightseeing
Nanaang (grandpa family saving)
76 entered the cave
81

FireFistLaw12

Bureau of Investigaytion and Ugly Bastard Slayer both rated this 5 stars? Well shit, I'm in

Update: Okay yeah this is the stuff, did not disappoint

ILOVETOREAD

¥401

64

Fifi

Best webtoon ever

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I love Dan already except everyone else to be part of his family. It's so cute. I wonder what the Grandfather is going to do cause the Murim is in chaos.

Last read 62
27August 2023

Myrkky

on going

Takumi

i don't like kids....crie