Honestly this was pretty disappointing. There are a lot of potentially interesting plot lines introduced but then they are dropped and everything is thrown together rather haphazardly. Not to mention the problem of all the important emotional conversations and moments happening off screen. It really takes the momentum out of the story and ruins the romance in this romance comic. The author needs a lesson in “show don’t tell”. That said, if it’s the author’s first comic I am willing to cut them some slack while they learn and improve their storytelling. Not a bad attempt for a first comic.
