Her personality is so frustrating :/ she’s trying too hard to be a pussy ass “saint”. Just a few crucial moves on her part would’ve eliminated sm bs up ahead. I don’t like females like her, acting like a religious nut who believes in heaven n hell. Life ain’t black n white b I bet no one gets to eat their own shit cuz she’s useless or it may be ml who gets the revenge on her behalf, the classic. 21
Why is this rated so high? It's not bad but it's not that good yk Characters are super wishy-washy, I legit cannot get a read on what the ml and FL's personalities are. There isn't just no direct characterization, there is no indirect characterization. They also have like no chemistry. I do not understand why the ML likes the FL. They are none pizzas. The story is also really rushed. The arc of her leaving her family was super quick (not enough set up, major time skip, her healing him also was really quick?? unsatisfying) and there's like no set up for the sex of her at the ML's place. This story legit felt like it was 16 chapters long. Where is it going from here? There's nowhere for it to go. Also minor thing: why on earth did she say "I don't know how to eat this" while looking at fruit cake. Was that a mistranslation? Bc like I get not knowing what it is but,,,, you eat by putting it in your mouth lmao
Anyways, not a great read but the first 16 chapters are great to pass time ¯_(ツ)_/¯
Love the Main Characters FL and ML (I want to Marry the ML's Dad )