Its very cliche and cringe. Ml is awkwardly showing his "interest" in her. Mc is just...idk. sometimes she looks fun but most of the time, it feels like the author is forcing her to look cool?. Like overly praising her over smth smal.
Its kind of irrational how trusting the fl is towards the ml's Mother and lions generelly, though she knows the original storyline, where the lions hated her from the beginning bc she was a weak blue bird. Like she showed the mother instand her abilities, she had hidden from her family for years. And fl's family was supposed to be a great bird Clan with no comparison, but they were soo weak against the lions, their mansion was invaded and the head of the family was beaten to the wheel chair. And that brings me to the next point, that is so irrational. The fl took such a forward revenge on her family and ruined it though she knows its a marriage of convinience that can only exist, if her 'soo great' family can provide the exchange- she herself would have been useless. Like she doesnt know the fact, that the ml's mother spotted an imprint from her son on her. There are so many issues I have already with the Story. Why is the fl soo expectant of this child marriage? Why didnt she fight back before the lions came (she could already shift and use her ability for one year and knew the og story line)? Why is the ml's mother so nice to the fl, though she knows about that prophecy? Shouldnt she be more wary at least? There are so many more questions, so I will drop it now.
